But I have gained so much from reading the knee-jerk thoughts of others. Their unedited paragraphs have challenged, encouraged, impressed. At last, they have prompted me to take up the challenge and just write. So today I do.
The prompt:
Whisper.
The still, small voice. The one you strain to hear when all the world is yelling. The one you’ll miss if you’re not listening.
The voice that can take a room of noisy children from an uproar to silent curiosity.
The voice of a mother passing words of affection—or perhaps words of admonition— to the wiggly young girl sitting next to her on the church pew.
The voice of a lover, spoken so close to your ear you can feel the breath, the sound waves.
The voice of God swirling from pages of black and white and red, rising in the quietest of moments when you pause to be still and know, pricking your spirit to smile at that stranger and ask how she is.
More powerful than a shout. More urgent than a scream. More compelling than a text message in all caps.
He whispers, and I only hear it when my soul is quiet. When my soul is at rest, trusting Him.
So sweet, Marissa. We hear when we are quiet. And that's the challenge. How to be quiet in a world of noise?
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful post. Oh, I do know what you mean about hoarding more of your written work than you will ever share. Thanks for being brave today. ~Leigha dropping by from fmf
ReplyDeleteMarissa, I am also new to the Five Minute Friday's. Well, Six Minute Saturday's if you count that I posted today! Your blog is beautiful and your words are beautiful! Glad I found you!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words, Marissa! I'm so glad you're part of the FMF community now...yup, you'll fit in nicely! :D Can't wait to keep reading your words!
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing! Beautiful. And well done for featured post!
ReplyDeleteThank you all for your kind words and for reading!
ReplyDeleteAhhhh.. Loved your post and I love that Kate is featuring it! Welcome to FMF and I look forward to stopping by again! Keep writing!
ReplyDeleteawesome. I love the whisper of the Lord.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!! And, welcome!!
ReplyDeleteYou're opening paragraph... oh, how I can relate... thanks for jumping in!!
Loved your post, and love the look of your blog too.
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